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Old 03-12-2010, 03:33 PM   #48 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by jase View Post
Synth i just trying to make sense of the story,and shit i know im picking but from your lyrics you say you have hit the town line,and i take it as your home.You still find the gang,and i take it your friends..etc.

Now to me i would be happy,(i know there can be tears of hapyness)and well would cry tears,being away from home...yeah ? no ? hmm lol.

I find it interesting as well the way you word,"and when I cry no tears deliver" as if you feel you should be more upset than you really are,and cannot get why you not crying a river.

Don't take what i say to critical...it's just attempts of lyric writing can be quite revealing on time's.It sounds like a hobo song....with the way they used to have camps out by the tracks,small communities,as it's the only way i could imagine you finding anyone along a river like that at 4am.

Hey man...Ain't my song, I'm just trying to help the dude out as best I can...

I just changed it up and and added the last part it..

peace
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