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08-26-2008, 08:09 AM
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| All-around great guy  Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Winnipeg, MB
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   |  I'm a wolf!
animated, celebrated, and intense I roam a world without pretence I知 a wolf in solemn lines I raze the plains and sing the songs that have no names I feel no love or pain I知 a wolf venerated, unrelenting, and composed I drift down paths that no one knows I知 a wolf eyes fixed on ground will never meet another pair and feel complete It痴 scenery to me I知 a wolf and if you wander off the darkened trail you may feel a secret stare watch your every move and I like how I do what I do! I知 a wolf! I知 a wolf! surreptitious, omnipresent, and astute, content to be alone with truth I知 a wolf for countless sights and sounds I致e known will live in memory alone that no one else can own I知 a wolf and the sun will circle overhead and come back around again and I will find no bed to suit my restless head and if you wander off the darkened trail you may feel a secret stare watch your every move and I知 the moon, forever on the prowl a surveyor and a stranger to all and I get what I want when I want! I知 a wolf! I知 a wolf! |
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08-26-2008, 08:49 AM
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| Hermit Permit  Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Melbourne, Australia
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i actually tried playing to ur lyrics using my own progression and i think its fantastic.. the structure is awesomely structured... i think its a profound song i dig, i dig
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08-29-2008, 07:11 AM
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| All-around great guy Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Winnipeg, MB
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This one may very well never come to be with music. In my head it's more of a rock song than something I could accomplish on my own. But I have the day off tomorrow, so I promise I will at least make an effort to a) work out some way to do it acoustically, or b) try and simulate the way I hear it in my head.
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09-12-2008, 05:09 PM
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| militant hippie Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Shepherdstown buddha shack
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surreptitious, omnipresent, and astute Good luck singing that. You'll be a great yet. I wrote two choruses yesterday. I think my writer's block has vanished. I've decided just to focus not on being a great but being the drunken bafoon I am.
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