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Old 03-10-2010, 12:09 AM   #1 (permalink)
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It's 4am and i just hit the town line

I haven't been home in some time

I can still find the gang down by the river
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Old 03-10-2010, 12:25 AM   #2 (permalink)
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It's 4am and i just hit the town line

I haven't been home in some time

I can still find the gang down by the river

When I get home my hoe better make dinner.
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It's 4am and i just hit the town line

I haven't been home in some time

I can still find the gang down by the river

When I get home my hoe better make dinner.
I dont think that will work. Made me lauph but no, anyone els?
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It's 4am and i just hit the town line

I haven't been home in some time

I can still find the gang down by the river

sitting by the fire doing whatever
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conveniently wasting time
having a difficult time
trying to have a good time
your guess is good as mine
i think that vengeance is mine
nobody's business but mine
my perfect partners in crime
a return to the scene of the crime
destiny turns on a dime
our friendship is not worth a dime
nursing a bottle of wine
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It's 4am and i just hit the town line

I haven't been home in some time

I can still find the gang down by the river

But if I drink much more whiskey it'll cost me a liver!
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conveniently wasting time
having a difficult time
trying to have a good time
your guess is good as mine
i think that vengeance is mine
nobody's business but mine
my perfect partners in crime
a return to the scene of the crime
destiny turns on a dime
our friendship is not worth a dime
nursing a bottle of wine
I like that!!
because this will be about me oing home and my best friend and i make homemade wine!! I may take some out.
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verse 1
It's 4am and i just hit the town line

I haven't been home in some time

I can still find the gang down by the river, sitting by the fire

chorus
just wasting time
trying to have a good time
my partners in crime
return to the scene of the crime
I'm nursing a bottle of wine
verse 2
hey the gangs all here, been a while since we've been here

catching up, talking about the old days

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i would like to work in the name Brian
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My name is Brian,
I'd tell you it's Gary,
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